Second session of my music magazine article

This is my second draft of my magazine article. I think at this stage I have don very good, I have decided to use plenty of colour in my article as my magazine is a POP MAGAZINE and so it has to be bold and bright, on the right hand side of the article I am planning on having an image to fill the page. I have included everything which I am supposed to use in the article such as masthead of the magazine at the bottom of the page, and page number and date. I have used a border to go around the page to make the article look more better and stand out.